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It was a midnight that had a smell like wet grass
                                    And a sound like smiles.

The river rushed past on all sides, and

                                                                                                disappeared

                                            sky,
as ecstatic eyes flew to the        and arms outstretched.


An attempt was made,
by a girl in a blue dress and blue shoes
    ; To catch that moment,
                                                              [and frame it.]


The shudder of the movement and the lines
of the stars and the shriek stuck in the back
of her throat and the feeling of running and
never looking back.

It was a midnight.
©2008-2009 ~millaBot
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a night i'd love to remember but prefer to forget

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:iconlady-divine:
you've a nice style of writing... which makes one want to hang onto every word..:)

do visit my posts and comment if you get time

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:iconloudwisdom:
once again you prove yourself to be a great writer, please keep it up ^-^

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We are all just living in an illsion so who can say im delusional? Kevin Regan

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thankyou for your lovely words!!
i'll be sure to drop by ^-^
:iconmillabot:
you're too kind.
and there's not enough space in my head for all the words in there,
there will be more to come for sure

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