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fear of small spaces by ~millaBot:iconmillaBot:



Somedays,
the weather just
makes sense.


(It's not about the superficial -
the old cliches,

of grey skies
and rainy days.)

But something

d
  e
    e
      p
        e
          r.




The way humidity can inspire
                                       >>>claustrophobia<<<
                                                                          
             so much pressure and intensity
             that rain b u r s t s.

relief.


---

- Later.

It's how clear and cold the night is.

With only the (smallest) suggestion of moonlight
       edging through whispering leaves

Over rain that keeps time
with muted melodies
and sleeping breath.


And it's comforting...

(That something fits.)
©2008-2009 ~millaBot
:iconmillabot:

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written on the back of a receipt for textbooks and pens

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:iconloudwisdom:
this is cool how you illustrated and in general very well written

--
We are all just living in an illsion so who can say im delusional? Kevin Regan

It does not matter how slowly you go so long as you do not stop. Confucius
:iconmillabot:
thankyou!
i think sometimes words draw as much meaning out of how it's written
as what is written
:iconzarathustras-crown:
You need to put up more of your poetry! You've got a really interesting style I haven't seen much (the closest I can think would be Christopher Dewdney who does a similar "painting a picture with words" style). This is gorgeous,

"It's how clear and cold the night is.

With only the (smallest) suggestion of moonlight
edging through whispering leaves"

Absolutely beautiful

--
Andrew Hussey

"For a sorcerer, reality, or the world we all know, is only a description that has been pounded into you from the moment you were born."

-Carlos Castaneda
:iconmillabot:
you're about my only fan :)
i really want to get into writing again
i'll try harder :) thanks for the faith

--
it's almost like you had it planned,
it's like you smiled and shook my hand
and said: "hey, i'm about to screw you over big time."

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